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  • COMPOSITION:

          Free plastic bags have been banned in China since June 1, 2008. Some people think that plastic bags bring us convenience, but others have different opinions towards this matter. What is your opinion?

          Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

    Should Plastic Bags Be Banned?

          You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate details. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

  • Should Plastic Bags Be Banned? Nowadays, plastic bads are still widely used all around the world for its convenience and portability. Actually, the plastic bags are more used in those developing countries than the developed countries. However, the plastic bags can bring us destructive pollution, which is called "white pollution" and is hard to be treated. Thus, I strongly suggst that the plastic bags should be banned for their harmfulness, the concern on people's and animals' health and the worldwild environment problems. In the first place, the plastic bags have a lot of disadvantges, such as they can produce poisons in the case of high temprature, and they can not be decomposed even in a long period of time. According to these defects,the plastic bags, especially the colored ones, should be banned timely. In the second place, human beings and animals are quite weak under the complicated natural environment, and they are greatly thretened by some known or unknown deases caused by plastic bags. Therefore, I advice that when people are go shopping, they had better use cloth bads instead og plastic ones. The last but not the least, the environmental problem caused by plastic bags is rather serious until now. There are some major environmental problems, and we people should take some measures to reduce the use of plastic bads and then gradually give up suing them. Plastic bags have many disadvantages and we human beings should always remind of ourselevs to take care of the environment, so that we can have a better living environment.
  • NOTE-WRITING:      Write a note of about 50 to 60 words based on the following situation:
          Your friend, Wang Hua comes from Wenchuan, which has been badly damaged by the earthquake. Write him a note to express your concern and encourage him.
  • Dear Wanng Hua, After I heard the news of earthquake happened in your hometown, I was in great shock, and I felt very sorry about that. At first, I hope you can keep a optimistic attitude toards life beacuse we still have a lot of things to deal with. And you must believe our country and the peoples around the country, and all of us will make a contribution to the restore of your hometown. Yours, Gao Hua
    用户:咖啡壶盖   性别:   城市:   评论人数:4   评分人数:2   平均分数:21   提交时间:2011-3-7
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      评论时间:2011-04-15 07:28
      小作文没有日期呀
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        评论时间:2011-04-11 08:52
        我觉得很不错哎~
        asdbojue
      • 性别:         城市:        第一部分分数:11        第二部分分数:7        总分数:18
        评论时间:2011-03-22 05:25
        我感觉第一篇文章的条理是很清晰的,但是有一些语法错误和单词拼写错误,比如:concern组成的短语有concern with,concern about.似乎没有concern on.另外是remind sb. of doing sth.(sb.是宾格),其余的单词拼写错误我想是在打字是粗心的原因吧。第二篇小作文,正确的格式是正文开头要写时间的,格式不正确的话,得分直接就下去了。我也仅是提出我自己的看法而已,如有不当的地方,还需您海涵。
        黄色的小兔子
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        评论时间:2011-03-15 11:48
        写得太棒了!条理清楚,语言通顺,逻辑性强


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