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    四级模拟题十三 [编辑推荐]
  • COMPOSITION:

    According to the recent report from the Youth Justice Board (YJB), UK, girls are committing more crimes in the current society compared with the past. People begin to wonder what the causes are and what measures can be taken. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

    On the Rising Crime Rate of Girls

    You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

  • Anxiety about growing lawlessness among young women was fuelled by figures in the report from the Youth Justice Board (YJB), UK. It disclosed that the number of offences committed by girls has made a great leap compared with that in the past. I'm inclined to hold the idea that the increase in young women's crime rate is caused by the changes in one's values, which could be guided and reformed through proper education. Social values held by the youth have been changing all the time under the influences of various media, such as TV, the Internet, movies, etc. Too much exposure to the Hollywood's luxury, violence and law-violating heroes has twisted fine traditional values and has led to vanity and ignorance among the young females. Ignorance of the law caused by stories about super-heroes/heroines who break the law at will and get away easily puts some innocent girls at risk of committing misdeeds. Crime prevention calls for concerted efforts by all areas of civil society. One potential measure is to incorporate law into education. General legal knowledge introduced from primary school to college could inhibit crime as well as equip women to protect themselves. Meanwhile education in the family and within the community could act as a crime prevention network whereby teachers and parents work together to keep young adults on the right track. With a good analysis of young women's offences as well as some proper measures taken, the rising crime commitment rate would be, hopefully, kept on a tight rein.
  • NOTE-WRITING:

    Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

          Your roommate Jane didn't receive the call from her high school classmate Helen. Write her a note to inform her that Helen asked her to book a hotel for two nights and book an air ticket back to Kunming.

    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

  • Dear Jane, Your high school classmate Helen made a long distance call from Kunming this morning while you were out. She asked you to make a reservation for a hotel room for two nights and book an air ticket to Kunming on August 7. Sorry that I am unable to tell you face to face, for I had to leave for something urgent. Yours,
    用户:天龙八步   性别:   城市:   评论人数:3   评分人数:1   平均分数:22   提交时间:2011-7-29
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      评论时间:2012-01-11 12:05
      第一部分得分 12 第二部分得分 8 第一部分写得挺好的。you have a good command of many vocabularies and i really enjoy it .as for the content ,it is also ok . as for the second part ,you forgot to write the date and your signature,which is very necessaary.
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      评论时间:2011-10-15 08:56
      hgj
      汤圆小孩2011
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      评论时间:2011-10-11 08:01
      yeah,you did good job and it is coherent.but when you use word may be not Precision.


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