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    四级模拟试题二十二 
  • COMPOSITION:

    Nowadays we often hear people criticize younger generations for being self-centered and being selfish, which to some extent gets a point. Thus, the problem is what we can do to eliminate selfishness in ourselves. What's your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

    How to Eliminate Selfishness?

    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your view is.
    In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate details.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

  • It is not unusual for us to hear complaints from the elders that we are too selfish and self-centered. We can't help asking ourselves: Is it the case? The time has come to confront our inner being and to admit we need to make a change. But what can we do? Maybe we can open our hearts. By opening hearts, it means giving yourself room to think of others. How often do you go back home to visit your parents and how many times have you found excuses for not going home for the weekend? Have you ever thought about your parents' feelings? Disappointment? One more week of loneliness? Make room for them in your heart, please. Opening hearts is also reflected in being a giver on purpose. Not many people around you will ask you for anything, but if you be more attentive, you will find many ways to help someone in need. Would you pay for a dinner when your friend is in financial problem? How about sparing a kind word to the sad-looking person sitting next to you on a bus? There are many opportunities to be generous. Don't overlook them. A life lived only for ourselves, a life where the only priority is to please ourselves, a life spent in indifference to billions of other souls we share the Earth with, is an empty life. So my friends, let's learn to be considerate and generous, and live a life full of meaning.
  • NOTE-WRITING:

    Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

    Your friend Mary invited you to attend a party on next Saturday and asked you to arrive on Friday evening if you are available. She also hoped that you bring some Chinese "spring rolls". Write a reply to her invitation.

  • July 12, 2011 Dear Mary, It was very nice to get your invitation to spend the next weekend with you. Luckily I'm completely free then, so I'll say "yes" and I'll be arriving at your place at around 6 p.m. on Friday evening. The idea of having a party on Saturday sounds marvelous! I promise to bring you some Chinese "spring rolls". Well, see you then. Yours, Lucy
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      张静景
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      评论时间:2014-10-20 08:55
      语言很流畅。但第一个感觉逻辑有点点乱了,不那么切题,,第二个不错。
      Mulmerry
    • 性别:         城市:        第一部分分数:8        第二部分分数:7        总分数:15
      评论时间:2014-03-31 07:44
      第一部分要注意写题目,题目也会占一些分数的,最通常的就是写成三段式,不要写成一段或者两段,
      zsdwyvivian
    • 性别:         城市:        第一部分分数:12        第二部分分数:8        总分数:20
      评论时间:2012-03-30 06:35
      第一部分,首先没有分段落,是一个问题。再者,有些语言不是那么地道。总觉得有些中国式,但同时作为一个学生,我觉得他的水平还是不错的,像confront这些能运用进去
      游客
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      评论时间:2012-03-03 07:23
      第一篇亮点句A life lived only for ourselves, a life where the only priority is to please ourselves, a life spent in indifference to billions of other souls we share the Earth with, is an empty life. 总体还不错,便条调理也比较清晰。
      黄昌武
    • 性别:         城市:        第一部分分数:9        第二部分分数:6        总分数:15
      评论时间:2012-02-20 05:13
      总体符合题意,条理要是清晰一点就更好了。


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