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    四级模拟试题二十三 
  • COMPOSITION:

    Success in life results from many elements: intelligence, hard work, patience, persistence, etc. What do your think is the most important? Write a composition of about 200 words on this topic.

    You are to write in three parts:
    In the first part, state specifically what your view is.
    In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

  • Self-Confidence: the Key to Success There are many factors that can contribute to a person's success in life. Whether he is at school or at work, a person is more likely to succeed if he is hard-working, honest, intelligent, responsible, and so on. But of all the possible characteristics that can affect one's success, I believe self-confidence to be the most important for the following reasons. The first reason is that when a person has self-confidence he believes in himself. He believes that he can and will succeed, and this gives him the courage to try new things. In order to be successful we must be willing to take some risks, so having self-confidence is very important. Another reason is that a confident person rarely gives up. When he fails he tries again and again until he wins. Finally, confident people are not afraid to demonstrate their achievements. This is not to say that they should brag about them, but that they should gracefully and confidently accept the compliments of others. When their achievements are noticed more by others at school or work, they are more likely to succeed. In short, I believe self-confidence to be the most important factor in success. It enables people to take risks, try again when they fail, and enjoy their accomplishments when they win. With these qualities, a confident person can succeed easily at school or work.
  • NOTE-WRITING:

    Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:
    Your delegation has just returned from a visit to a university in the United States, where you were warmly treated by Professor Schaefer. Please write a letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality and hope for further cooperation.

    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

  • August 21st, 2011 Dear Prof. Schaefer, Please allow me to express my sincere appreciation for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during our delegation's recent visit to your university. It was nice of you to introduce me to so many famous professors and celebrated scholars at your university. Thanks to your kindness and consideration, we had a most pleasant and fulfilling experience during our stay. I hope you will someday pay a short visit to our university and give us some lectures on "Modern American Literature". If you want me for some help in China, please do not hesitate to write to me. Looking forward to seeing you again soon. Sincerely yours, Liu Tong
    用户:黄色的小兔子   性别:   城市:   评论人数:9   评分人数:2   平均分数:20   提交时间:2012-3-19
      游客
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      评论时间:2016-03-25 09:40
      会扣掉1分的。
      游客
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      评论时间:2016-03-25 09:39
      会扣掉1分的。
      游客
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      评论时间:2014-02-17 05:22
      Here are some personal comments on the Composition 1 a. On the whole , this composition follows the instructions.However, the lexical expreesions, and forms of setences are a bit simple,though grammatically correct in most of the passage, creating a taste of blandness after reading. b.The second reason which is used to support the opinion--Self-confidence is the most important element in life is inappropriate. From my point of view, a person who rarely gives up in life, just exactly shows the trait of persistence. c.The conclusion is not very pertinent to the opinion.
      bmwholy
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      评论时间:2013-11-22 06:15
      挺好的
      游客
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      评论时间:2013-10-21 09:36
      The composition is not very good.
      游客
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      评论时间:2013-03-26 06:59
      便条格式好奇怪
      Anglahappy
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      评论时间:2013-03-04 03:23
      not bad .i think they are good compositions
      游客
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      评论时间:2012-03-22 11:06
      便条字数超过80词,会扣掉1分的。
      游客
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      评论时间:2012-03-22 11:05
      便条字数超过要求,会扣掉1分的。


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