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  • COMPOSITION:

    Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

     

    Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?

     

    You are to write in three parts.

    In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.

    In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.

    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

  • It Is Not Wise to Make Friends Online With the Internet's development, it is popular for young people to make friends online. However, it is extremely not wise to do so, because it's not only unbelievable, but also a waste of time. When young people make friends online, they often just know each other by having a chat and sending picutures. No one can make sure that everyone online is telling the truth and sending his own photo. As we all know, there are so many liers on the Internet who cheat young people to earn money or something worse. Young people are so innocent that they may believe in others too easily. Thus they are also cheated easily. It's really not a good idea to make friends online since there are always unbeliveable imformation on the Internet. On the other hand, young people would like to spend a lot of time on making friends online. They may think about the friends even having classes. It has a bad influnce for them to be online too much, physically and mentally. They might have spent more time on reading, writting and doing sports instead of sitting before the computer. It is not neccisary to make friends online because we can make a good use of time to make good friends around us and do something meaningful. All in all, people should spend less time on making friends online, because it is not good if you are cheated and waste you time online.
  • NOTE-WRITING:

    Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the university's swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why.

     

    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

  • Dear Jimmy, Thank you for inviting to join the swimming club.however, i am not interested in swimming and what i really like is football. i want to join the football club. sorry for declining your kindly offer.Thanks for thinking of me, anyway. best regards yours sincerely jankie
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      sophen
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      评论时间:2010-03-31 02:25
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      小豆子
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      评论时间:2009-11-03 11:18
      It Is Not Wise to Make Friends Online With the Internet's development, it is popular for young people to make friends online. 注意标点,只有一套主谓宾。they often just know each other by having a chat and sending picutures. 请作者尽量避免中式英语,不要直接硬译。spend...in doing sth/on sth.作者在此语法点上多次出错。have influence on sb/sth. influence一般只潜移默化的影响,此处本人觉得用affect可能更为适合。还有拼写问题,necessary。
      黄色的小兔子
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      评论时间:2009-07-15 09:36
      写得挺好,学习ing


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