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    四级模拟试题三十三 
  • COMPOSITION:

    In the course of urbanization, we often find ourselves confronted with the old building problem. Some people think we should pull down the old houses and buildings in the way; however, others argue that they are cultural heritages and should be protected. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words.

    You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

  • My View on the Old Building Problem This problem is a much debated one in that it affects almost everybody in their daily life.As a college student,I think that it is reasonable to protect the old building. To begin with,it is high time for us to protected the old buildings ,at a certain point,in order to protect our cultural heritages.The meaningful old buildings can broaden our perspective,all of us should become aware of the the importance of protect old buildings rather than pull down them.Hence,we can make use of our spare time to visit some old buildings,which we can have a good time and wonderful experience.If we pull down the old buildings, there will be less happiness and fortune in the world.A further reason why I support this is that protecting the old buildings can improve the environment.Everybody should be committed to protect the earth we live in.The local environmental authorities have to impose regulation to protect the historical buildings,the government save some money to invest health care,energy,and education.Moreover,pull down old buildings will result in biological disaster. All in all,from what has been discussed above,a conclusion can be drawn that protecting the old buildings is necessary,I wish all of us can handle them with extreme care.
  • NOTE-WRITING:Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:
          Your cousin Sam has just received the letter of admission from Tsinghua University. Write him a note of congratulations and offer to invite him to dinner sometime.
  • April 18,2015 Dear Sam, I am so glad to hear of your admission from Tsinghua University.Best wishes for your further study.Would you like to come to my dinner at my department on Sunday?I have prepared a gift for you.Do come and find out the big surprise! Yours, Linda
    用户:红溜溜   性别:   城市:   评论人数:3   评分人数:3   平均分数:16   提交时间:2015-4-14
      你哪里来的优越感
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      评论时间:2016-01-18 09:56
      第一篇简单语法错误就不说了,阐述观点的句子较为简单。 第二篇,后半部分措辞不太恰当。
      游客
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      评论时间:2015-11-21 02:54
      你写的好
      silencexq
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      评论时间:2015-09-22 01:31
      Importance of protecting impose regulations to pulling down old buildings 没有分段


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