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          Is our society hostile to good people? According to a recent survey by China Youth Daily, 76.1 percent of the respondents say that our current society provides a “bad environment" for good people doing good things. On the other hand, the more optimistic would argue that each individual should try his or her best to do good things and be nice to others, instead of waiting for the “social environment” to improve. So, what do you think? Is a sound social environment necessary for people to have high moral standards and be good to others?
          Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic:

          Is a sound social environment necessary for people to be good to others?

          In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

          Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

  • Be a good man? Yes! Recently a heated discussion has arisen about whether people should be good to others against a bad social environment. Some people deem that people should be nice under whatever circumstances, while others believe that it is not necessary to be a good man since the environment is unpleasant. In my opinion, a sound social environment is not necessary for people to be good to others because doing good things is the bottom of conscience, and people should do good things reardless of others' comments. Firstly, doing good things is the bottom of conscience and everyone should be determined to hold the belief. Some people might say that doing good things probably harm yourself. But if you exchange the roles,supposing you are hurt, will you hope someone give his hand and help you? Certainly yes. Therefore doing good things is still the most important thing whenever and wherever as it lies at the bottom of our conscience. Secondly, it needs persistence and determination to be a good man despite others' comments. A sound social environment might contribute to your confidence to be a good man, but your determination should be the same against a bad environment. For example, Leifeng made every effort to help others despite others' ivory comments, and finally he won respect of all Chinese people. Although the social environment does not support your deeds, you still should be determined to be yourself and be good to others, and you will be recognized and respected sooner or later. Thirdly,it is also important to raise awareness of protecting oueselves from hurting when we do good things. Some kind-hearted people are harmed because they do not know how protect themselves from misunderstanding. For example, you help a hurt man but the man says it is you that hurt him. We cannot deny that thing might happen, but such things could be easily avoided if you recorded the whole event before. It is necessary to take precautions to protect yourselves before give your helping hands to others. In conclusion, it is important to be good to others despite the bad social environment since being a good man is the bottom of conscience, and we should be determined in spite of others' comments. But we should also raise the awareness of protecting oueselves when we help others, and do not make our good heart hurt when be good to others.
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      评论时间:2016-03-10 10:31
      写的真好,要是我就写不出这么好的句子。可能是网页排版的问题,中间没有分段,看着累,还有倒数第7行的oueselves应该是打错了吧


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